tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25261888.post3304548017794743039..comments2024-01-09T02:48:57.749-06:00Comments on a rather pleasant site: The TinkerReoganhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08828592443185128526noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25261888.post-91038054217186065932011-02-24T13:08:52.538-06:002011-02-24T13:08:52.538-06:00I have discovered the error! The passive tense off...I have discovered the error! The passive tense offends my inner ear.Reoganhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08828592443185128526noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25261888.post-77556536106782703212011-02-09T18:32:16.629-06:002011-02-09T18:32:16.629-06:00True.True.Reoganhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08828592443185128526noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25261888.post-57627298904959391652011-02-09T18:01:27.764-06:002011-02-09T18:01:27.764-06:00Gender nonspecificity is hard... I was successful ...Gender nonspecificity is hard... I was successful though.Xanthurianhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14148297872019132594noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25261888.post-7665703226857217692011-02-09T14:20:45.704-06:002011-02-09T14:20:45.704-06:00I am conflicted.
I like this story. I really do. ...I am conflicted.<br /><br />I like this story. I really do. I attempted something in a similar-ish vein for the second Tuesday Tale (Where did they go?).<br /><br />I like the repetitive structure.<br /><br />Yet, some of the writing is awkward and blocky. I know you write well, but I don't feel it here. <br /><br />Still a pleasure, though.Reoganhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08828592443185128526noreply@blogger.com