With Evil gone and peace returned
The Hero took a breath
He’d conquered Ganon and his horde
And sealed him in his death.
He saved the land from certain doom
And took a well-earned rest
But by the Goddess or his heart
He felt the urge to quest.
He bid farewell and built a fleet
To sail on oceans blue.
In search of bright exotic lands
And dangers bold and new.
The sea however isn’t tame
A storm started to brew
He climbed the mast to tie a rope
Debris had smashed in two.
The skies opened with murd’rous roar
A lightning bolt tore free.
The air about him cracked and churned
Link fell into the sea.
Her long red hair cascading down
She strolled along the shore.
She saw a body – stopped and gasped
Link lay upon deaths door.
Young Marin gave a shout and cry
And raised the towns alarm
From
To see what caused her harm.
Her Uncle Tarin saw it first;
The body in the foam.
The Niece and Uncle both allowed
This stranger in their home.
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16 comments:
You wrote this? Sorry, I just think you should get a carreer in poetry, this is incredible. How do you get this good?
oh my god...
If you don't have anything useful to contribute here I suggest you don't post.
Practice Met. Practice, and incredibly high standards. I spend eons on each stanza. I hate to have even one sour word.
I can tell, do you just write them before hand and then transcribe them or do you do it on the spot?
I write them by hand or on Word and when the need arises I copy and paste or re-write it on the blog.
LOL
Yes, it is a rather cumbersome method at times.
Seems fine to me.
But I must write, then transcribe. That's effort I loathe expending.
Still it's nice to see something like this up here, very nice poem.
Yes, certainly a spectacu- Ahem, I mean OH THANK YOU MET! I AM HUMBLE AND GRATEFUL AND JUNK! I AM HONORED BY YOUR PRAISE!
This is really great! Didn't see this until now, but you're a really great poet! Whoo!
:)
I actually ended up using this in a compilation of poems...
Still love it.
I don't. My early work lacked something I have now.
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