No warning.
The night breathed peace.
Shattered.
Lights flared over the hill.
Grew.
With a scream, the forms collided.
Silence.
We gathered around the wreck.
Uncomprehending.
Our shoes soaked in a puddle.
Blood.
Someone found the baby.
Howling.
Every phone called for help.
Please.
A whisper came from the overturned vehicle.
Horrified.
"It's my fault. It's all my fault."
Sobs.
I bent to console her.
Lying.
I spoke, but we both heard something else.
Truth.
"It's my fault. I killed her."
Them.
The couple had been beautiful.
Dead.
We tried to console her.
Tried.
She was chained to truth.
Forever.
Sunday, May 16, 2010
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2 comments:
This sounds like an episode of NCIS that was on last night...
ahem...
Now, to focus on constructive criticism, that was well-done. I liked how every other line was only one word.
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