He saw
the Banshee
above.
Closer
to the ground
it came.
No escape
from the
rain of death.
Only
one chance.
He jumped.
Skyjacked!
...
...
...
Why
did
he
steer
me
into
a tree?
Another failure;
beatdown.
So much for
Kill Joy.
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Why
did
he
steer
me
into
a tree?
That bit seemed odd to me.
The following is merely opinion, but Halo doesn't quite seem to fit the Thoughts format.
I thought it fit exceptionally well although I admit this one had some weak points. You can change that format if you wish; you are the master at correct spacing. I apologize if I've put a negative mark on Thursday Thoughts by writing them.
Ha! A negative mark. I laugh. Ha!
It just feels... jerky to me.
The video that I'm referring to in this post will soon be referenced on Fear Itself. Hopefully that makes things seem smoother.
I await with bated breath.
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