Wednesday, April 14, 2010

I Suck

Yeah, my bad...I always suck at posting right. I've got an idea, I think it's better than the last.

Malachi was tired of riding. He and his family had been riding all day, and he was completely bored and his legs felt like they would explode. He was about an hour away from his grandmother's house. They had driven from the north to the south, and he had not exercised in days. In fact, he was not even allowed to exercise. Malachi had undergone some extremely odd health issues, ones that had never been heard of before. His hands itched, his eyes burned, his head ached, and something inside of him was growing stronger. It was if there was a lump in his lungs, that seemed to be growing more and more powerful. He had been texting and playing video games for the past eight hours, and was so bored he just fell asleep. He was awoken by the car, slowing to a stop, at his grandmother's driveway. He groaned as he got up and out of the door, he moved in all the luggage, and sat down, as the dog was brought out of the car. He started falling asleep on the chair. He was woken by his father, who said that the dog should be walked. Malachi slumped out of the chair, grabbed the leash, and attached it to his dog as his father walked out the door. He followed him out and they began walking down the streets. Malachi noticed that his father's hand was in his pocket, and, oddly instinctively, took great notice to it. As they made it half way around the block, his father stopped. His face was covered in shadows, and he began to move his hand out of his pocket. A large knife was in his hand, glinting in the glow of a distant street light. Malachi thought he would scream...but he didn't. Something took a hold of him, the lump in his chest warming dangerously hot. He felt himself slam his fist into his father's gut, as he slammed his heel into his shins, he grabbed the knife out of his fathers hand, and he ran, his father chasing him. Malachi did not know what was going on, but he knew one thing. He was not going to die yet. To be continued if you want...

4 comments:

Met said...

Go ahead and continue it; I'd like to see where you're going. Of course let's get Reogan's input first, but I don't mind this.

Reogan said...

I want to see you continue it. There had better be reasoning behind the events.

Elphaba said...

Yay, two-parters (or more)! And you do not suck, Qupar!

Reogan said...

I refuse to agree with Elphaba's statement until you prove otherwise.