Thursday, September 30, 2010

Part 1, Hold

You are

a puppet.


Are you not?


What control

do you really have?


Do you want


to use

it?


There is

still

some choice,

some control.


You can drop

it.


Your choice,

but if you want

to use
it,

you must


hold.

3 comments:

Reogan said...

I really feel like the spacing has overpowered you a little. There are almost no two lines touching.

Nicely done, nonetheless.

Met said...

I like the spacing. Honestly though I feel as if this series has seen me do the least spacing yet. It's odd that you mention the exact opposite. Thanks for the input, it's nice to have a different perspective.

Reogan said...

By our differences we are made strong and passive-aggressive.