But I thought I'd try it this week. I don't really have a decent short story written yet, so here's my substitute: a poem lamenting how much I don't like writing poetry! Whoo!
"I'm not having a very good time,
I am sad because of this rhyme.
I'm not good at this.
It's monotonous,
I almost think that it's a crime.
My belief on this is adamant:
This horrid debacle makes me lament.
This awful exercise
Is when my spirit dies
And hardens slowly into cement."
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Your meter is off :p
Read the title.
What were you trying for though? Iambs? Trochees? A terrifying antispast-molossus abomination?
I'd actually like to see that last one.
I have no idea what meter I was going for. Poetry is not something I spend any free time studying.
You wrote a poem without a meter? That's really just rhyming prose then. Poetry is poetry because of meter, as I see it. That's why blank verse works.
limericks are the best poetry ever
No. No they are not.
Also, you failed once again to capitalize or use end punctuation.
Cool, then it's rhyming prose. Whatever. :P
And I agree with Figroth. Limericks ARE the best poems ever.
No. Epics are. Easily.
What about an epic limerick? How awesome would that be?
Impossible. The best one could do is an epic of limericks.
Whatever. It would be awesome!
This wouldn't be half bad for a rap...
What? Just an idea...
You know I hate rap for the most part, unless it's OCR style ;)
That isn't rap. It's a mockery thereof.
What's wrong with mocking rap?
I never said that was bad. I support it.
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