Thursday, June 03, 2010

Thoughts

Every word


is

abused.



The

extent


of the


damage




was overlooked.




Do not


forget.



Understanding



each


line.




There is




something more



here


in



Thoughts.

2 comments:

Reogan said...

I feel I must warn you that you're about to fall into a pit I once knew. Do not be afraid to place more than two words on a line. Weigh them, and find their place, but do not push.

Otherwise, I approve. It was quite meta, and meta is good.

Elphaba said...

This is an interesting way to look at Thursday Thoughts. I like it!